’’A Simple Exchange of Niceties’’ by Joanne Fedler
’’A Simple Exchange of Niceties’’, a short story by Joanne Fedler, 2007. In the text ’’A Simple Exchange of Niceties’’ the narrator lives in what could probably be a big city. In this city there’s a park which she usually visits, in this park there’s a sure bench that she likes higher than the others, and she or he calls it her personal bench. The theme is teenage issues and about teenagers creating into the maturity. The narrator’s language may be very regular and is what each other American citizen could probably be speaking.
The language contains a number of curse phrases and slang words too. Example given: ‘’ She appeared so bloody eager on kids ‘’ (Page 11 line 133). The narrator does not have a lot self-worth; she had a one evening stand with a Damien from the bar, which resulted in her getting pregnant. Damien told her that he never wanted to have children with a ‘’trashy whore’’ like her after he had fertilized her, which made her feel like a trashy whore too.
She has misplaced the sympathy of her mom too; the narrator is a really troubled one who is shop-lifting and has been impregnated at a very young age; this reveals that she is not very certain of herself, and has not grown up yet.
Her mom does not even wish to bail her out from the prison after she had been caught shop-lifting. The narrator is a bit boastful against people she doesn’t know. Example given when the old lady has issues untwisting her bag, and the narrator simply ignores it; which reveals that she doesn’t like to communicate with strangers, which she additionally mentions – ‘’When I’m sitting on my bench, I’m generally not within the temper for small-talk and chit-chat.
’’ – (Page 9, line 43). She complains about when she is sitting on her bench and folks come and sit down with out asking if she is okay with it; this may be a very two-faced motion, would she herself even ‘’exchange niceties’’ if she was the one approaching a stranger on a bench? Her vanity can also be shown when a girl with a e-book and a bottle of water comes along; the girl says that she mustn’t smoke.
Her perspective may be very typical for the society of youth, and the truth that she smokes whereas having a rising fetus in her stomach and not even caring about it really enlightens that she has not grown up but. From her oasis which is the bench, the narrator seems to be growing from being a late teenager who is appearing very cool and not really caring about aside from herself, to realizing the qualities of life, and understanding different people. As she speaks with the lady with the e-book ‘’When Fertility Fails’’, she seems to develop a kind of sympathy for the lady as she speaks of her and her husband’s drawback. The incontrovertible truth that the girl can’t be fertilized by her husband makes the narrator act different than she is used to.
Example given when the woman says that she would sells everything that she possesses if she could presumably be a mother, and the narrator replies by – ‘’ ‘’It wasn’t meant to be,’’ I found myself saying, which actually wasn’t me talking. ‘’(Page 10 line 115-116) and she or he refers to as if it was her Nan speaking. As this is not how she usually would react, it’s an apparent sign that she is growing into a young lady, significantly when she decides to offer away her coming baby to the sad woman. When the narrator tells her mother that she is pregnant, the mother appears to state that she actually cares for her – ‘’ don’t you DARE give my granddaughter away, ‘’ (Page 12 156) which made the narrator imagine that she is definitely value one thing. And when the narrator provides birth to the baby and the mom tells her that she remembers when she was an toddler lying on her chest. This actually exhibits that the mother is happy and has realized that her daughter has grown into a young lady.